The umbilicus severed,
Such a pretty curling ribbon
Sliced by low flying fear.
Un-tethered, the mylar plated soul floats away,
abraded by atmospheric friction,
to engorge the abhorrent void.
severed tether
The umbilicus severed,
Such a pretty curling ribbon
Sliced by low flying fear.
Un-tethered, the mylar plated soul floats away,
abraded by atmospheric friction,
to engorge the abhorrent void.
volutedmind 
Wow, just wow! 🙂
Wow, your response!. 🙂
intrigued by your phrase …
“mylar plated soul floats away”
several aspects to explore
So vivid, I especially adore the last line.
Thank you. I’m glad you like it.